got some feedback regarding the practice presentation i gave today – although it was about 8 mins over time (meant to be 15), i know where i can cut out some stuff.

comments and notes below:

clarity of Walnut better than unix, problems with walnut

explicitly state BeFS, maybe before ‘trends’

relate explicitly file systems -> object store

explicitly state that word processing is an example – perhaps state others

positioning of problem pages, bring together, remove duplicates

tie solutions to problems

summary slide of what works

use meta-data stuff as extensibility example

if trouble with time, drop out some extra things.

work a bit more at very beginning.

explain walnut,
what it does
how my project relates to it

explicit Aims slide